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Anatomy Practice by Kiji-blu Anatomy Practice by Kiji-blu
so i did some practice with help from my manga drawing book <3
i think august looks awesome. im really proud of how i drew her in this :'D

can i just say something?
if you have a character you really love, like really really love, and someone wants you to change something cuz it bothers them? DONT. just needed to say that.

see some issues i missed on her anatomy? critique please!
(note: if you do critique, this is manga, so some things may be different c: )
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:iconkiyahinthestars:
I really love her you are sooooo good at anatomy, I love her name never change it its the best was she born in August or does she like august i was born in august i love august its a pretty name everyone should have it, Did you no we u look up the name august on google you get 3560000000 hits August is just amazing isnt it do you love august i no i do I LOVE THE NAME AUGUST! <- that was a really long run on sentance huh. btw jordan that is really good. byeee jordy mew teheeee.
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All I would say is the same thing Rovanna said, that and
you can't see the ankle definition... idk how to explain it but her calves look muffintop to her boots, and it needs to be more evened out there.
if that's the belt on her waist it looks a bit unnatural idk y maybe its just me
her shoulders are a bit stiff, but if she's hiding her hands behind her back maybe she's purposefully stiff
but usually it's more relaxed and all
other than that I love her so much she's adorable and appealing

now that my crit is soo short imma ksdgbaiofdgvpfehkgbvproitfhmbirgt;hbslfhmgblatkjehnrbsaytjbtwjusrhetgjn
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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Kiji-blu Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
c:
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Rovanna Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012   Digital Artist
I think she looks really good, especially around the shoulders. The only thing I would suggest is to taper her calves a bit more. People's thighs are usually bigger than their calves. c:
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Kiji-blu Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oki!
thanks c:
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Schuffles Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i think you did really well on the anatomy
my human anatomy is a no xD
altho her nose appears to be missing but thats prolly just the style x3
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Kiji-blu Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yea with manga noses are really small, and her hair ended up covering what i had xD
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Schuffles Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
xD
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